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Celebrating the Process

Yesterday I got to do one of the best things…I sent my completed manuscript to my editor. It’s always such a good feeling. But so much leads up to it.

The idea: The moment when I say, Aha! So that’s what this book will be about, and that person will be the protagonist. (sometimes it’s just one or the other, rather than both at once. Sometimes it takes ages to realize what the book is actually about, while sometimes a theme or situation comes to mind without characters to act it out)

The research: Often books have something in them I don’t know about, so I get to go and find out the details. Whether it’s hapkido, dairy farming, computer games, police procedure, or something else entirely, this is a very fun part of a project. It provides details, anecdotes, characters, and often even the plot. Love that research.

The outline: This changes from project to project. With the Stella books, I would write out a full outline, sometimes even twenty-five pages, with each chapter figured in. Sometimes extra chapters would sneak in, or even extra characters, but the main body of the work would stay the same. With some of my newer work it’s not so planned — with Embrace the Grim Reaper, which I sent in yesterday, my proposal consisted of two paragraphs, and my outline was two pages of notes, in no particular order. Some people call it writing into the mist, which is an image I like. You write along, with only a few feet in front of you clearing as you go. The end is unknown. This can provide some times of anxiety (ie., panic) but I’ve found things eventually do reveal themselves. I worked this same way with the juvenile fantasy I wrote, and it was pretty exciting at times.

The beginning: There comes the time when you finally put the first words on the page. They begin to add up, and before you know it you’re at the middle, and after a while you show up at the end. Needless to say, these different segments can take little time or lots of time, and vary with each project. But no matter what, you know each part will eventually come.

First draft: Ah, it feels so good. That first time you write the last words. Before you change them. But to say, there it is, a complete story, is wonderful. Then you get to go back through and find all the things you missed and said repeatedly. But at least you have something to change.

First readers: For me it’s my folks and whatever expert has helped me with the books. For Stella it was a mixture of dairy farmers, tattoo artists, and rock musicians. For Lost Sons it was a naval officer and a police officer. For Grim Reaper it was my friend Jenny, who is a hapkido blackbelt. It’s always good to have those extra eyes to make sure my gaffes aren’t too huge.

Next draft: The go-through to fix the typos, loose ends, and character disconnects the first readers find. Then a final read to make sure it all fits together on the page the way it does in my mind.

And finally, sending it off to my editor: which, as I said, feels mighty good.

I’m sure there will be another stage in here, which is the final draft, where I change whatever the editor notices. With any luck it won’t be major — just those typos and word changes my first readers missed. But there’s always the chance she’ll want something bigger, to do with plot or characater. I just need to be prepared for that, and then I can be pleasantly surprised if there’s not much work.

Whatever happens, today I celebrate! Play some word games, do some of the housework I’ve been neglecting, and go early Christmas shopping with my mom. Oh, and eat some chocolate. Can’t forget that.

So happy Send it to the Editor Day to all of you! If you’re a writer, I’ll be happy to celebrate that day for you, whenever it comes.

Cheers!

11 Responses to “Celebrating the Process”

  1. Judy….don’t encourage this with Casey or the Snikers factory will single handedly cure the economic issues in the USA.

    Zz

    by Zorro on November 13th, 2008 at 4:49 am

  2. Play some word games? Isn’t that what you just did?

    by Don on November 13th, 2008 at 5:11 am

  3. That’s right, Don! Writing a novel is one big word game. : ) The games I play are on Facebook — one that’s like Boggle, and one that’s called Word Twist, that gives you letters and you find as many words as you can in it. I’m sure some people think it’s crazy, but I enjoy it!

    by Judy on November 13th, 2008 at 7:10 am

  4. Here’s a word game, Judy. How many names can you find in these letters?

    R O R O Z

    by Orroz on November 13th, 2008 at 7:24 am

  5. Har, har, Orroz. How about “zoo,” as in this blog is a zoo?

    by Judy on November 13th, 2008 at 7:37 am

  6. I had “Happy Send To The Editor Day” two weeks ago. Still haven’t heard from my editor. No longer have fingernails.

    by Lorraine Bartlett on November 13th, 2008 at 8:46 am

  7. Congratulations, Judy! It’s the best feeling in the world, that happy euphoria after “the end” and before the next “the beginning.” Enjoy it as much–and as long–as you can.

    PS, I had “happy send it to the editor day,” too, like you and Lorraine. Mine went in more than a month ago. Still no word.

    by Casey on November 13th, 2008 at 8:58 am

  8. Hi Judy,
    And what is this book that just left the nest? Is this the new series from PPP?
    Anyway, enjoy today.
    Caryn

    by caryn on November 13th, 2008 at 9:25 am

  9. Yes, Caryn, this is Embrace the Grim Reaper, which comes out from PPP in May. A new series featuring a woman who travels from place to place, trying to find the will to live after a tragedy. It was lots of fun to write.

    by Judy on November 13th, 2008 at 9:29 am

  10. I used to work as a driver for a rap duo called Grin Rapper. They were from Montana. You just don’t have many rap groups from Montana. Had one record that did poorly, we did a tour, and they folded.
    Grin Rapper. You just reminded me of that.

    by Orroz on November 13th, 2008 at 10:59 am

  11. I’ll hold you to the celebrating when mine comes around!

    by Marissa Turner on November 13th, 2008 at 3:17 pm